The Promise

Last Friday, we invited Year 6 to come and listen to our writing based on the book 'The Promise' by Nicola Davies.
It was a great experience to share our creativity with Year 6 and get their advice on how we could improve our work.

Some of the comments from Year 6 included:

'Wow! This is incredible. Your description makes me want to read more. How is this not published yet?'
' You have widened your vocabulary, for example 'devouring', and you have made a story that makes you want to read more.'
'I liked the fact that it was different and you have used cohesion and description'

Thank you Year 6 for all your advice!

We have now moved on to learn about performance poetry, in particular Benjamin Zephaniah's Talking Turkeys!